Today i had a horrible day because this morning i woke up late and then couldnt find parking at bart and was almost late to yearup and then at yearup i didnt find good and my tech teacher seem to be picking on me today he was all snappy and I was gettin angry but i didnt until i got an infraction for doing a task and in part of doing the task was to do my blog and i had one all setup for today but after my experience today i had to write about it.then when I left yearup i got to my car and i had a ticket for $35 that i didnt have then i had to get work on my toe and now im walking with a blue boot thing and got alot of homework so yea i felt unchristian like today and pretty upset. GodBless YungPreacher |
Calm Down breath and then stop and think about the sistuation. Then do that in your writing. Read it because you talk better than that and i challenge you to write better than that you were just rambeling and it was going no where. Your leaving the reader hanging.